Edmund Hokinson
Dulwich College Beijing, Joy Ryu, Fiction: Group 2
I
t was a ghostly night when the window shook in the stormy dark colored blanket. I hated
that night when Edmund Hokinson called me to the down stairs. It was police mcplint just
next to Edmund. “What’s up?”Edmund claimed to the paled police. “This time is too hard for
me to solve it by myself. “It was in the Gobi Desert and it’s a huge tornado.” Police Mcplint
whispered seriously.
We all went to the Gobi Desert that night. When we got to the Desert where the tornado was
made, it seemed that Edmund noticed something. “It’s made by a human. It’s too big for nature
to make.”Edmund mumbled. As well as the broken woods, we also found two people lying on the
sandy messy ground. One was surely the second son of the owner of the nature power company,
Alfred Munches and the other one was the well named killer, who stabbed Alfred’s mother.
Alfred also died so we all thought that the crime was over but Edmund found a knife but on
the knife, there was someone’s name “Peter Munches.” Oh my! Peter lives in Manila. So we just
called Peter to the Gobi Hotel to talk about the craziest thing in the world.
Now he came to the Gobi Hotel with the two red eyes saying “I want to kill you all” “Hello…
..”Peter mumbled “So why did you kill your brother and someone similar as you?” Edmund and
I asked. “If you ask me about that, there is no reason I can’t tell you because I don’t know what
you guys are going to do on me.” creamed Peter as he stood up getting ready to go, but Edmund
is never those kind of person who lets a human go in one minute. “Then would you tell me what
your mother said as she was facing the death?” exclaimed Mr.Hokinson. Peter’s eyes shook like an
earth quick. Then he slowly and silently opened a note book and showed it to us all. It said Peter,
what is the crown that you want to wear, love, wealth?’
The next day, we got the morning plane to Manila. On the plane I really tried to work but
Edmund was snoring so loudly that there was an air crash. He kicked the seats away and snored
as loud as he could. Everybody stared at me as if it was me who snored like a giant lion.
Anyway, we got to the first son of the chairman of the nature power station company (who is
Peter). Luckily, Peter was at work so we could go into the house whenever we wanted.
We could easily find out that it was Peter’s mother who Peter loved and couldn’t live without
her. And as me, Helen the great detective’s friend found a great piece of paper that says ‘Mother, I
won’t let the one who stabbed you violently go free. Never! ‘
Now it was time for us to go and get Peter.
We also found a letter that says ‘You idiots, I’m just leaving Manila to Mongolia. Ha-ha!’ So it
means we just came here and we just need to leave now? Oh I can’t believe it. “Wait! It’s just a trap
Peter has made. We are not going anywhere, I heard a human’s breathing.” whispered Edmund as
quietly as a mouse. As we thought, Peter the sacredly cat came out of the secret wall.
But this time was different. Peter had a metal stick just about to hit Edmund’s forehead when
Edmund caught the metal stick. They started to fight like two wolves trying to get the meet making
a huge bunch of smoke. I wish I could have a camera because they looked just like pro fighters.
It started to rain outside. I thought it was a kind rain that could stop the fire in the room. It
was the final end when the police came and put his blubbery arm between the two blazing fires.
By exidant, the two people got thrown out of the building. And the most important information
