The Stolen Fossils
Kowloon Junior School, Jasmine Leung, Fiction: Group 2
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t started at an ordinary day at Lucy’s house when the sun was just rising and the birds had
begun to chirp. Until Lucy the detective received an envelope. Lucy opened the envelope it said:
Dear Lucy,
I am the queen of the Gobi Desert. Unfortunately the treasure and fossils my ancestors has
hidden in the Maton Cave have been gone. Me and my siblings think some robber stole them.
I have heard that you are one of the most popular junior detective in the world. It would be a
pleasure to invite you to the Gobi Desert to finish this mystery. I have put five tickets to go to the
Gobi Desert in this envelope and 5 maps. One is for you, the other four are for your friends. Hope
you have a pleasant journey.
From the Queen of the Gobi Dessert
Lucy was really happy and excited, this is gonna be the best mystery ever. I think I’m gonna
invite Jasmine, Eunice, Elize and Dink. But when she rang Dink, Dink said he had a soccer
tournament. So Lucy invited Josh, Josh was free. She called the twin sisters Eunice and Elize and
they were free. Now I just have to call Jasmine, she was free too.
They all waited in the airport until the airplane arrived, when they went inside the airplane
they realized that they were in first class. The kids were really happy and they ordered a cup of
honey water and sweet corn. Ah, this honey water is so refreshing. said Lucy.
When they arrived, Lucy used the map that the queen had gave her, and gave the others 1
map each. So first of all, Lucy said let’s head to the Maton Cave. When they were heading there,
they heard some loud screeches. What’s that noise, and where is Josh? Said Eunice. I think he
might be kidnapped, said Elize. We must head to the place where the loud screech is coming from.
So the girls head to the loud screech and it lead them to a really dusty, dark cave. Ahh!, shouted
Elize. There’s spiders, and what’s that brown thing there? It looks like some stones. Whispered
Eunice. Oh, it might be fossils, said Lucy.
How do we know what is it, plus where is Josh, I’m getting freak out. Said Jasmine. Calm
down, said Lucy. So now we have to find Josh, or else we can’t finish the mystery. Said Jasmine.
Why? said Elize. Duh this is called teamwork! Said Jasmine. Shh, someone might be hearing us
said Eunice. Help, help, help! A screech came again. Who could it be, was it Josh or some sort of
other person. Let’s go check, said Lucy. When they walked to where the screech was coming from,
they saw Josh. Josh what are you doing? Said Jasmine. I was just crouching in this creepy, dark
cage, because I was chase by some wild dogs. You scared us. Said Eunice. Sorry,said Josh. After
all that conversation, they checked the brown thing. The brown thing were……..Fossils. The junior
detectives were so happy. Until……..The voice came, what are you doing there, said a loud angry
voice. After a while 4 men came. One had a big face with hairy hair all over his arms and wore
glasses, the 2th had big strong muscles, the 3th had one big black mole covered with freckles, the
4th one had a big nose covered with pimples. Want a fight shouted the gang! A fight? said the
junior detective. We will start it now, said the gang. Because the junior detectives were so clever
and worked really well, they thought of an idea to win the gang. First of all Jasmine took the
