New Tales of the Gobi Desert
S.T.F.A. Ho Yat Tung Primary School, Lum Wing Tung, Fiction: Group 2
H
ave you all finished your homework?’’ asked Amy’s mother.
‘‘Yes, of course!’’ Annie and Amy said.
‘‘Our mother is very noisy. Let’s watch TV together!’’ Amy said.
The TV program was about the Gobi Desert.
‘‘If our mother goes to the Gobi Desert, it will be quiet at home,’’ said Annie. After a while,
they found out that their mother really went to the desert and got lost. They shouted, “Oh no! Our
mother is lost!”
Then Amy said, “We should go into the TV to find our mother.”
Suddenly, a group of camels came out of the TV. “We can help you to save your mother. An
‘allghoi khorkhoi’ caught her. Follow us,” they said. They brought them to the desert and gave
them a map which could help them to find their mother.
Then, they started their adventure trip.
“We are really in the Gobi Desert,” Amy said.
“Yes, of course. Now, let me tell you a story about the allghoi khorkhoi,” an old camel said. “A
long time ago, there was an allghoi khorkhoi. It’s home was under the Gobi Desert. Some people
who lived in the Gobi Desert said it was just a story and some people said they have really seen
them before. They said it was really awful…”
“It’s so scary. How can I save our mother?” I asked.
“We will help you!” said the camels.
“It’s so late now. Let’s stay one night at our home,” said the camels.
“Thanks you so much! Let’s go now!” said Annie and Amy.
The next morning, they ate some bread and started to save their mother. First, the camels
brought them to find their friends for help. Then, they started to go to the enemy’s home. On the
way, they met the snow leopards, golden eagles brown bears and wolves. They were enemies. They
fought and we were very dangerous. Luckily, the camels helped and explained who the real enemy
was. Finally, all the animals promised to help save their mother. They saved her from the allghoi
khorkhoi’s jail when it was sleeping. Finally, they went back home safety by the camel’s help.
After they went back home, they said sorry to their mother and watched TV together. They
saw their friends, camels, snow leopards, golden eagles brown bears, and wolves, in the Gobi
Desert. They were all safe in there because they killed the allghoi khorkhoi and lived happily
together. They said, “What an adventure!”
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