The Prehistoric Surprise
Stewards Pooi Kei Primary School, Leung Sing Fung Gabriel, Fiction: Group 2
J
oe was on a mission to find gold in Gobi desert. Although he knew that it was very
dangerous and he did not want to go there, he told himself, ‘I must go!”
The beginning of this story is as follows: When Joe was still a child, he lived in a poor
but happy family. But when he was eighteen years old, the situation changed. His dad died
in a car accident and his mum got a serious disease. Because Joe didn’t want to lose both of his
parents, he wanted to see the doctor but he found that he was really too poor to pay the medical
fee! At last, he got an idea, to find some gold in Gobi desert, in an attempt to cure his mum.
When he reached Gobi desert, he took all the things he had to use and started to look for some
gold. He dug in the sand for a few hours, and he still couldn’t find what he wanted. When he was
very tired and hungry, he sat on a stone to take a nap. Suddenly, a very loud noise woke him up
and he found the thing that he sat on wasn’t a stone. It was a dinosaur egg!Then he saw a really
big thing, as big as a giant, a T-Rex!
When Joe saw the T-Rex, he was really scared and he did not move. Although he wanted to
run, he was frozen stiff. At that moment, he thought that he would die. Suddenly, he saw another
T-Rex. It spoke to him. It said, “Little guy, let’s strike him down! He is so strong that I can’t defeat
him. I am Max. Can you help me?” Because Joe found that Max was quite kind, he told him,
“Okay, I’ll help you.”
At first, Max told Joe to sit on his back and give commands to him because he thought
humans were smarter than himself. Joe followed his instructions. Next, Joe called Max to go
straight ahead and bite the other T-Rex’s neck. Max did it and the other T-Rex roared in pain.
Then, Joe told Max to swing the tail at the opponent. Max did it in a second and the other T-Rex
was swung up to the sky. Finally, Joe called Max to hit the opponent on the head. The opponent
flew miles away from them. Where did it go? Nobody knows. Maybe it flew to the ocean or the
volcano or the moon! God knows. Max is so strong!
After the fight, Max told Joe where it came from. Max was from about one hundred million
years ago. One day, he went inside a cave with his friends. When he left the cave, he could not
find his friends. Seconds later the cave disappeared and he was in the future! Then, he found there
were a few dinosaurs there too. Because Max liked fighting with the other dinosaurs, it fought
with that T-Rex.
Suddenly, Joe thought of that the dinosaur egg that he sat on, and he asked Max, “Is the
dinosaur egg that I sat on yours?” Max answered, “No, it isn’t mine. You can take it away.” So, Joe
went back to the place that he found the dinosaur egg.
When he went there, he could not find the dinosaur egg! Seconds later he found a rock and he
heard somebody talk to him. The sound came from the sky! They said, “Come and fight with us! If
you win, we will give you the dinosaur egg!’ The creatures that talked to Joe came down from the
sky. They were a triceratops and an ankylosaurus, Max’s friends!
A triceratops is a dinosaur that has three horns on its head and an ankylosaurus is a dinosaur
whose body is covered by spikes. Joe sat on Max’s back, ready to fight with them. The battle
started. The triceratops and the ankylosaurus went straight ahead and used their horns and head
to hit Max but Max dodged it. Then Joe called Max to bite the Triceratops’ tail and swing it to the
