The Craziest Experience
Queen Elizabeth School Old Students’ Association Primary School, Ivan Chan, Fiction: Group 2
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ast year, I went to the Gobi Desert. I felt excited and happy about my trip. I had always
wanted to go there to learn more about the weather, the animals and the sand dune of the
Gobi Desert. I got there by helicopter. After landing, the first thing I wanted to see was
the beautiful sunrise because I had heard it was wonderful. When I saw the desert for the
first time, I was stunned at the size. It was so huge! While walking around the desert under the
big hot sun, I saw some dangerous cactuses. Suddenly, I saw some snakes slithering towards me.
I felt scared and I didn’t know what to do. Luckily, I had remembered to pack a knife in case of
danger. I opened my bag, took out the knife and threw it at the snakes. I thanked my lucky stars
I had remembered to bring a knife as it may have saved my life. I felt very tired after that and
decided to rest for a while. The next morning I set off, ready to begin my amazing adventure into
the Gobi Desert again.
I was walking on the cool sand at night trying to find my family, when all of a sudden I looked
up into the sky and saw a huge flying desert pirate ship. It was black and ugly. As it moved closer
towards me, I felt a high level of danger. I was scared because I was afraid the pirates would come
catch me. I quickly laid down and covered my whole body with sand to hide from the pirates. After
a few minutes, the pirate ship flew away. I was safe for now. At that moment I knew this was going
to be an amazing adventure. I stood up and kept walking, looking for my lost family.
From out of nowhere, the pirate ship came again. It was headed right for me and coming fast.
Just when I was about to give up all hope of escaping, the most amazing thing happened. All of
a sudden, a bright light appeared in front of me. It was growing stronger and stronger. I was as
blind as a bat. I couldn’t see anything. I was so shocked. I reached out my hands and yelled for
help, but no one was there. Then I heard a strange sound. It was the sound of the pirates coming
to get me. I knew this would be the end of me. Finally, I could see again and I was back home. I
never found out what the strange light was or why it appeared in front of me.
I am so excited I got to have this experience and I want to go back and do it all over again. I
will never forget this trip for as long as I live.