Fiction: Group 1
NewTale of The Pearl River Delta
Bradbury School, Chan, Ian - 7, Fiction: Group 1
ne morning I was thinking about making the World’s biggest factory. I said to my mum, “Can we
make theWorld’s biggest factory?”
My mum Doris and my dad Alex were secret agents. We asked all our relatives to tell their friends
about our plan.
All people gathered together in our building in Central, Hong Kong. We called to the President, “can we
make theWorld’s biggest factory?” “Okay!” he said.
Everyone wanted me to be the leader. Then I organised everyone’s job in the factory, even for my laziest
cousins Ryan and Nicole.
We decided to build the factory in the area of The Pearl River Delta. It took 730 whole days to construct it.
The factory was tall and long, it stretched up to Macau and Guangdong from Hong Kong. We hired millions
of workers from all of these places. We made books, toys, healthy food and stuff to protect the environment.
We made the best products!
In the news, we heard that Chinese white dolphins were nearly extinct. One afternoon, the President called
us to rescue the dolphins.
The next day Secret Agent Alex and I went to the sea. “Look! There are hundreds of wounded dolphins out
there.” I said.
Then, we found two evil guys taking nets with sharp edges catching dolphins. The sidekick took some toxic
boxes and started polluting the sea far away. We used our secret agent skills to build an agent boat to race
after the evil guys. Quickly we caught the sidekick and forced him to tell us the name of his boss and give
us his picture. The sidekick said,“his name is Inferno.” We took the picture of Inferno back to the factory.
We went back lightning fast, we found Ryan sleeping and drooling in the factory. Nicole kept on eating
everyone’s lunch.
“Wake up! Ryan!”“Stop eating! Nicole!” we shouted. We told them about Inferno.
Nicole asked, “who is Inferno?” Ryan replied, “I knew Inferno long time ago, he wanted to destroy our
environment. His weakness is water.” Secret Agent Doris immediately helped to search Inferno on the
internet. It was found that his weakness was water.
We decided to invent a robot dragon which breathed out water and a robot gigantic sucker fish which
cleaned up pollution. We wore an invisible cloak made in the factory. We went into Inferno’s secret hideout
to put something that the robot dragon liked - frogs! Inside the hideout, we found a pod of wounded
dolphins. We started to leave frogs near Inferno. Suddenly the robot dragon picked up the scent of frogs and
flew to Inferno, and breathed water all over it. Then the humongous wave surrounded Inferno, he was
immediately knocked down by the dragon’s tail. Inferno was extremely weak and disappeared. In front of us
was the robot sucker fish guarding the Chinese white dolphins back to the sea.
One day the President called me “you will be the next President!”
All of us have happy life.
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