Fiction: Group 2
The Underwater Kingdom
Glenealy School, Yak, Audrey - 8, Fiction: Group 2
t the Pearl River Delta sightseeing area, three girls, Daisy, Emily and Melody were taking pictures
while Harmony was reading a small book called “All about Dolphins”. Suddenly Harmony’s bow
begins to glow. Soon Daisy, Emily and Melody bows also begin to glow but none of them took
notice.
When Harmony read the whole book, she started reading a new book called “How to see a dolphin”. A
while later she felt a silky type of fabric appearing on her. She also noticed fabrics appearing on her friends as
well. Melody was now wearing a white silky shirt with a black skirt and had a brown pony tail. Daisy had a
white dress with blond pig tail while Emily had a green silky dress with a red braid. Harmony had a sea blue
dress with straight black hair. Harmony grabbed her friends and they all jump into the water and begin
swimming to the Underwater Kingdom.
As they swam deeper into the Pearl River Delta, Harmony felt like they were being watched. As they swam
past a school of fish, they saw the pink Underwater Kingdom. Soon a pretty dolphin princess called
Dolphinella swam towards the girls ‘’ Thank goodness you’re here, the pirate sharks are coming!” Harmony
felt like the pit of her stomach dropped and asked, ‘’But why?’’ Dophinella replied “I don’t know , but I
know someone who can help you’’. As soon as she said those words, a beautiful mermaid swam to them and
said ‘’Hi my name is Crystal and I am your guide.” The girls were thrilled to hear this. Then another
mermaid came and mumbled quietly, ‘’Hi, I am Amy”. Daisy replied with a confused look, “Er… hi Amy?’’
Crystal interrupted, ’’ This is Amy, our driver’’ pointing at a shell car. “Cool!’’ exclaimed Melody who was
very good at making mini metal and plastic moveable robots and was good at music too but the shell car was
really cool to her. Suddenly Daisy said ‘’ Hey, Melody can make mini robots to defeat the sharks ‘’. Melody
cried in protest ‘’ But the sharks are huge and the robots are tiny …” Harmony interrupted, “ there is no
other way ‘’. Then the three girls turned to Emily and said, “what about you? You’ve been awfully quiet.’’
Emily replied, ‘’Well, maybe if we go to the sharks hideout and see what there’re up to? Melody is the only
good one at adventures so she can sneak around… hey where is Amy?” Everyone looked around “She is
gone’’, gasped a shocked Daisy. Emily who by now was getting a little chatty said, “Well we need to find
her”. Crystal asked politely “Melody can you drive us?’’ to which Melody replied ‘’Sure’’.
Soon they were speeding across the water to the sharks’ hideout. Along the way, Emily kept asking
questions on why when and where? She was talking nonstop so no one got a chance to answer her. Not
long after, they saw an old cozy cave. “You can stay here’’ there was a voice behind them and a young girl
was there ‘’ My name is Yvette and I have lots of sisters, the oldest is called Eve and the youngest is called
Caitlin the second youngest is called Leona the third youngest is called Matilda, the forth youngest is called
Isabella and the …” Emily interrupted, ‘’Yes we know you have tons of relatives, but why are you letting us
stay here? Yvette explained “Well, we needed money so we decided to open a hostel to make money, my
cousin Nia found this cave and we helped her decorate and named it Cozy Cave Hostel. You are the first
people to ever come to visit. Crystal asked “Ooh, how much?” Yvette replied smiling, “58.7 seashells”.
Crystal took the sea shells out of the car and gave the money to Yvette. The next day, they got back to the
car and waved goodbye to Yvette and were soon at the shark’s hideout. Melody transformed into something
looking like a spy with plenty of tools. She jumped onto the roof of the hideout and looked through the
hole. She saw the sharks eating their dinner and talking and then she saw Amy eating with them telling evil
jokes. All of a sudden the sharks became quiet. Then the head shark came in and declared, “We must
destroy Mermaidtopia” to which Amy added “We must rule the Pearl River Delta but some pesky human
girls are going to come so we need to move quickly”. Then the sharks swam out of the hideout. Melody
whispered “Duck!” And the girls jumped into a nearby bush. The sharks swam to Memaidtopia ready to
attack. At that moment Yvette who was watching stood up to the sharks. “Yvette!” gasped Amy ‘’you
escaped ‘’. Amy had a history with Yvette. When Yvette won the best mermaid award, Amy trapped her in
the seaweed cave dungeon and stole her prize. ”Miss me?’’ Yvette said slyly. “What are you doing here! ‘’
shouted Amy. ‘’Look. I apologize for winning the award and I am sorry for what you had been through “.
Yvette said sadly. ‘’Apology not accepted.’’ Amy laughed. But suddenly, the four girls arrived and created a
huge blast of magic that blasted Amy and the sharks away forever. Everyone cheered. Yvette swam to hug
them. “The sharks are finally defeated”,
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