HKYWA 2015 Online Anthology (Fiction Group 1 & 2) - page 468

Fiction: Group 2
New Tales of the Pearl River Delta
SKH YCMCJ Primary School, Lee, Long Sum - 11, Fiction: Group 2
esterday, my dad told me a story, he said “Once upon a time, had a triangle continent, there were
not safe, there had three islands, Xi Jiang, North River Dong Jiang, these three islands always fight,
they all do not believe themselves. One day, they stopped to fight because their places had an evil
man come….
The evil man said” you all are rubbish, if you all do not give all money to me tomorrow, I will kill you
all.” the man disappeared strangely. At night, they all stopped fighting, shutting and killing, they just discuss
about how to defeat the evil man. Suddenly, they thought a good discrimination law.
Next day, the evil man came, he asked” hey guys give me all your property!” Then, had a boy named
Sam, he was a little boy, he said “Uncle, can you shut up? You are very noisy!” Sam used his foot to kick
the man’s leg vigorously. The evil man was very angry and left quickly.
The next day morning, an evil man brought his family member and his father to help him. They
used their knife because they wanted to kill them. Luckily, the villager could resist attack and drove them
away. However, they were too late, the evil man has settled the TNT in this three continent. In the end,
these three places became our famous travel places. The Pearl River Delta, These three places can become
the famous travel places because after the TNT explosion these three places precipitation, then there become
Pearl River Delta.”
After dad telling the story, dad asked me “What is your feeling after reading this book?” I said, “I
think this look is very amazing. This book let me know the friendship is very important.” “As the proverb
goes “ Failure is the mother of success. Do anything, Although we maybe fail, we can’t give up, we need to
continue work hard. If we give up easily, then why do we need to do things?
Then my dad told me about the Pearl River Delta’s history, I felt so relish. Through this story. I
learn if I are do friend with my classmate. We should believe ourselves. If we always suspicious ourselves,
then how do we do friends?
If I can be the story Characters, I will becomes the evil man because if I becomes the evil man. I
will do something let them know how to be friends and let them know why friendship is very important.
If I can be the story Characters, I will choose one of the villager because I will advice them don’t
fight themselves because they are a big and warm family i will tell them. “We need to attack the bag people.
Are not our big family member. Why we need to kill our member? We can accommodate ourselves.
In the end. I hope my story can be write on story book. And I hope I can travel the famous travel
place, the Pearl River Delta.
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